Let me start by saying that I recently got Grammarly for Chrome and I had to disable it because the moment I copied this into the posting area that grammar check went apeshit.
I’m not kidding. It found over 300 grammar problems and the suggestion boxes were getting so disruptive I had to shut it down. This is one of those things that just makes me love this fic for how absolutely shit it is. I almost missed this. Almost. I barely started the commentary and my brain already hurts. Ugh, let’s get to it then. Final chapters!
Fair warning guys, the last chapter is where I tend to lose my shit at how ridiculous this is, and… While I’m not commentating on this blindly like the Christian Potter, expect my commentary to somewhat reflect that. I’m just saying; it can and will get worse.