My Immortal Chapters 42-44 (With Commentary)

[Chapters: 1-3, 4-6, 7-9, 10-12, 13-15, 16-18, 19-22, 23-25, 26-28, 29-31, 32-34, 35-37, 38-4142-44]

Let me start by saying that I recently got Grammarly for Chrome and I had to disable it because the moment I copied this into the posting area that grammar check went apeshit.

I’m not kidding. It found over 300 grammar problems and the suggestion boxes were getting so disruptive I had to shut it down. This is one of those things that just makes me love this fic for how absolutely shit it is. I almost missed this. Almost. I barely started the commentary and my brain already hurts. Ugh, let’s get to it then. Final chapters!

Fair warning guys, the last chapter is where I tend to lose my shit at how ridiculous this is, and… While I’m not commentating on this blindly like the Christian Potter, expect my commentary to somewhat reflect that. I’m just saying; it can and will get worse.

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My Immortal Chapters 38-41 (With Troll chapter and Commentary)

[Chapters: 1-3, 4-6, 7-9, 10-12, 13-15, 16-18, 19-22, 23-25, 26-28, 29-31, 32-34, 35-37, 38-4142-44]

Hello, guys! Welcome back to the My Immortal Commentary. See, I told you we’d go back to it eventually! It’s been a good break, but I think now is the time to delve back into this pit of madness.

Now, there are two versions of chapter 39. One of them allegedly written by a troll who took over Tara’s account on Fanfiction.net. However, it is speculated that the whole thing was made up by Tara herself. So… Who knows? Who cares? I don’t. The actual Chapter 39 was reposted as chapter 40 and chapter 40 as 41 and so on so forth. So for this I’m posting from 38 to 41, chapter 39 being the ‘bonus’ troll chapter. And that means that there is only one more post to make after this one. How cool is that!?

That also means my next two Christian Potter posts will be ‘double features’ with two chapters each in order to catch up; not so cool.

But let’s just get to it.

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My Immortal Chapters 23 – 25 (With Commentary)

[Chapters: 1-3, 4-6, 7-9, 10-12, 13-15, 16-18, 19-22, 23-25, 26-28, 29-31, 32-34, 35-37, 38-4142-44]

“Oh, great, we’re still doing this thing!” – You all think, sarcastically of course.

Yeah, of all the things I could commit to, it had to be this. I have a book I’ve been trying to get done for like 10 years, but if I’m going to finish SOMETHING… *sigh* I need psychiatric help, I just do… Fucking hell.

Let’s just get on with this.

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My Immortal Chapters 19-22 (With Commentary)

[Chapters: 1-3, 4-6, 7-9, 10-12, 13-15, 16-18, 19-22, 23-25, 26-28, 29-31, 32-34, 35-37, 38-4142-44]

Hey guys! I know it’s been a while and I’ll come back soon and explain why, but for now, let us read some more badfic, because I totally missed Eboby and the gang (haha, not really). And yes, we’re doing an extra chapter this time around because a) chapter 22 is considerably short and b) I want to reach the halfway mark already on this thing. So by the end of this post it’ll 22 down and 22 more to go. Don’t fret, guys… We’ll survive this, I promise.

Also, despite the fact I have nothing to do with the creation of this here literary atrocity, I profoundly apologize for exposing you to the following chapters if Dobby is your favorite character. I am just so very sorry. >.>

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My Immortal Chapters 16-18 (With Commentary)

[Chapters: 1-3, 4-6, 7-9, 10-12, 13-15, 16-18, 19-22, 23-25, 26-28, 29-31, 32-34, 35-37, 38-4142-44]

Hey, guys! Haven’t done one of these in a while, sooo… Welcome back to this thing… I just want to take the time here to apologize and express my condolences for the loss of any brain cells while reading this here work of literature and also say thanks for not… you know… unfollowing the crazy badfic addicted Bird during this here reposting spree. You guys are great. 🙂

That said, we’re almost reaching the halfway mark… Let’s get into this, shall we? 

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